#1 07-20-2017 4:52 pm

AliJayShannon
From: Dundee, Scotland
Registered: 07-20-2017
Posts: 3

Work in progress - July 2017

Afternoon all, I just joined up and thought I would post my progress shot. This is my first time taking part in the 11 second club so looking forward to it, been looking through all the other folks progress films too! Feel free to critique smile Cheers!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YG4WkYNW2GQ

Last edited by AliJayShannon (07-20-2017 8:10 pm)

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#2 07-21-2017 7:24 am

snuffymcsnuff
Registered: 02-04-2013
Posts: 93

Re: Work in progress - July 2017

It looks like you're exclusively moving him in the upper torso, so it comes off as if his lower body is frozen in place. Definitely try to engage the hips, if only just a little. It'll make your shot come to life a lot more.

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#3 07-21-2017 8:47 am

AliJayShannon
From: Dundee, Scotland
Registered: 07-20-2017
Posts: 3

Re: Work in progress - July 2017

Thanks! Thats actually something I was thinking myself while going over it last night, just need to try figure out what to do with his lower body.. haha.

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