#1 07-10-2017 5:00 pm

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
Registered: 02-08-2017
Posts: 85
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sneaking guy

this is a part of the scene i am trying to mAKE.. in this scene the guy is sneaking inside the room to catch something.. i am almost done with the sneaking part so came here to have some critiques and suggestions from you guys.. please help me out. i would love to know the improvements needed and the suggestions.. thanks smile

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#2 07-10-2017 8:58 pm

chris_drummer
Registered: 04-01-2012
Posts: 5

Re: sneaking guy

Hey, instead of trying to twist his body from his pelvis, try a bit higher up in his shoulders or his mid-spine. Weight is in issue here as well. Also watch out for your knees locking up when they're extended. Hope this helps.

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#3 07-11-2017 1:45 am

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
Registered: 02-08-2017
Posts: 85
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Re: sneaking guy

Thanks for the review..  I will work on it ASAP..  But can u  tell me a bit more as in what should I specifically work on?

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