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#1 07-04-2017 7:46 pm
- touw22
- Registered: 04-07-2017
- Posts: 3
Jump cycle exercise
Hi guys, I am working on a little jump animation, and wanted to know if there are any things I could change about it.
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/165069#202789
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#2 07-04-2017 10:48 pm
- Akrome
- Registered: 06-19-2017
- Posts: 2
Re: Jump cycle exercise
Hi, I think you have good poses. Maybe you could add overlap (offset) to the spine and head, because they all bend at the same time which makes them feel rigid
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#3 07-05-2017 8:55 am
- touw22
- Registered: 04-07-2017
- Posts: 3
Re: Jump cycle exercise
Alright, thank you! I will give that a try
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#5 07-05-2017 11:38 am
- touw22
- Registered: 04-07-2017
- Posts: 3
Re: Jump cycle exercise
Thanks for the notes! I made some adjustments https://syncsketch.com/sketch/165069#202954
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#6 07-07-2017 11:10 am
- Evelyn3D
- From: Oceanside-San Diego, CA
- Registered: 02-07-2014
- Posts: 55
Re: Jump cycle exercise
you've animated this nicely there's squash, stretch, and it has a nice pop to it
here is a few notes I think could help push it, even though its looking good so far.
1.lift up his left foot as they spread apart, the slide from one frame to another makes it appear unreal.
2. try adding a little more offset to the timing of things like the eyebrows and arms
3. try playing with the axis of things, like tilting his and body
4. maybe change the overall shapes of the limbs by twisting the wrists and changing the hand shapes and even having more variation on the feet.
hope these, help, if anything they are just my little opinions. awesome job
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