#1 07-02-2017 2:46 pm

mr_krovatka
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July 2017 WIP. Hello!

Hello!

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#2 07-03-2017 4:43 pm

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#3 07-04-2017 6:07 pm

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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

Hey,
Cool camera angle for this scene. It's dynamic, I feel it works well.
For the poses, I think that the torso don't move enough. Not enough change of positions and appeal inside from my point of view.
Good luck for the competition smile


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#4 07-05-2017 4:45 pm

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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

maevapelletanimation wrote:

Good luck for the competition smile

Thank you for your feedback! 
This is my 3 step. I made more torso movement there.

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#5 07-07-2017 6:43 am

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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

What do you think? What is better way for animation pipeline?

1. baking body anim -> spline body anim -> baking face anim -> spline face anim
OR
2. baking body anim -> baking face anim -> spline body anim -> spline face anim

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#6 07-07-2017 11:50 am

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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

when you say "bake anim" are you talking about generating a keyframe on every single frame. If so I would not do this as that is way more difficult to clean up


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#7 07-07-2017 4:12 pm

mr_krovatka
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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

KyleG wrote:

when you say "bake anim" are you talking about generating a keyframe on every single frame. If so I would not do this as that is way more difficult to clean up

No, i mean key with stepped tangent.
What I have to make after I made stepped keys? Stepped keys for face or make spline keys for body?

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#8 07-08-2017 12:32 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

Hi,
The guy's on the right on shot 1 and when you cut to shot 2 he's now on the left. That breaks the continuity and makes the sequence confusing. Check this:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/180-degree_rule

Hope this helps.
Other than that, the animation is looking pretty nice!

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#9 07-12-2017 3:05 am

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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

To Ivan's Point, he is correct. However you are able to break this rule as long as you show visual cue as to when to switch the actors/actresses sides in the composition. I see that you're showing the female jumping out from behind the male in shot 2, because this is so abrupt, you are very close to breaking this 180 degree rule. This may also be due to it simply being in stepped/clamped animation at this point, but maybe have the female delay her hop-skip-jump to the other side of the screen in shot 2 for a moment to really reinforce a new action line, otherwise it can be disorienting. Here's a great tutorial showcasing how to work with action lines and how to line of shot sequences with action that makes sense to the viewer.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HinUychY3sE

Watch the whole thing it helps. I had to rewatch this for my scene I'm working on too as I have shifting action lines.

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#10 07-12-2017 3:59 pm

mr_krovatka
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Re: July 2017 WIP. Hello!

IvanMendozaMedina wrote:

Hi,
The guy's on the right on shot 1 and when you cut to shot 2 he's now on the left. That breaks the continuity and makes the sequence confusing. Check this:
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DonMarks wrote:

However you are able to break this rule as long as you show visual cue as to when to switch the actors/actresses sides in the composition.
!

Thank you for your advices! I think, I am not so good, for break rules. So, I fixed this mistake. And, there is my 4 step! Now I think to start smooth animation. When I finish it, I will start face animation.

What do you think?

https://youtu.be/N47yNjP7bSs

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#11 07-23-2017 8:17 am

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