#1 06-24-2017 8:28 pm

godor
Registered: 07-15-2013
Posts: 11

june - WIP

https://player.vimeo.com/video/222976875

thank you! any feedback welcome!

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#2 06-24-2017 9:13 pm

wantonfox
Registered: 06-05-2017
Posts: 2

Re: june - WIP

This is looking nice! I like the pose the criminal strikes when he says "it's an outlaw name." One thing that caught my eye is when the older police officer puts his arm down between saying "it's cool to have a codename" and "it's not that weird" I think it's a lot of movement and may play smoother if he keeps his hand up when transitioning between those two poses! Nice work tho smile

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