#1 06-15-2017 6:22 am

Masstertron
Registered: 11-26-2015
Posts: 6

June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

Hi everyone!

My WIP is here:

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All feedback is welcome! Thank you smile

Last edited by Masstertron (06-16-2017 5:11 am)

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#2 06-15-2017 8:22 am

snuffymcsnuff
Registered: 02-04-2013
Posts: 96

Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

Super, super charming! Animation looks real nice overall, my only concern would be that the cut around 0:07 feels a little jarring at the moment, possibly because of the prominence of the teeth in frame as compared to the next frame. Oh and I noticed there's a tiny bit of popping going on in the guys' feet during the first shot, but again, that's minor stuff.

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#3 06-16-2017 1:05 am

Masstertron
Registered: 11-26-2015
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Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

Thank you for the feedback snuffy! Shall implement.

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#4 06-19-2017 8:51 am

kalel6
From: Dublin, Ireland
Registered: 10-02-2015
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Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!


“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world"

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#5 06-27-2017 10:49 pm

Easy619
Registered: 12-15-2012
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Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

Pretty good. Top 11 possibly?


"Talent you have naturally. Skill is only developed by hours and hours and hours of beating on your craft." - Will Smith

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#6 06-28-2017 8:35 pm

danbraga74
Registered: 12-14-2014
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Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

Nice!!! Congrats!! The only thing that bothered me (just a little) was, the gun gesture. Maybe because both hands are doing the same...But anyway, still a  great work.

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#7 06-29-2017 3:44 am

JasonL
Registered: 06-29-2017
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Re: June 2017 WIP - All feedback welcome!

That is really cool! I love the unique take on this with animals as characters. With some of these animations I find that the voice doesn't always fit with the character and can impede the performance but I feel it works really well with what you've produced.

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