#1 05-17-2017 12:49 am

Easy619
Registered: 12-15-2012
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May_Baker wip

Feedback is always welcome. big_smile

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#2 05-17-2017 10:35 am

Belichenko_Andrey
Registered: 04-26-2017
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Re: May_Baker wip

The cool cook smile

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#3 05-19-2017 7:11 pm

Easy619
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Re: May_Baker wip

Update. Still so much to do big_smile. Trying to make this my best entry. I may tone down the big eyes reaction to the "cause I'm dying" part.

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#4 05-20-2017 8:35 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
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Re: May_Baker wip

Looks good! All the best.

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#5 05-21-2017 5:50 am

nithu3d
Registered: 09-07-2014
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Re: May_Baker wip

Hi,
This looks great.
One suggestion that I have foru is regarding the acting choice u have followed.
You could add a lil bit of subtext by making him - look away in distance - when he says 'in that canning factory'
Add some eye darts whne he recollects his memory there
His eyes seem dead throughout.

Best of luck!!

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#6 05-29-2017 12:56 am

Easy619
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Re: May_Baker wip

A little update. Added some camera cuts.

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#7 05-31-2017 1:00 pm

snuffymcsnuff
Registered: 02-04-2013
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Re: May_Baker wip

I know it's probably too late for more feedback (for the competition at least), but I'm gonna second nithu3d here, having the big guy look off into the distance would add a nice touch. I'm also not sure about the expression change on the guy on the left when the line "I'm dying" happens. It seems a bit too much maybe. Or that it would hurt for his mouth to stay in that position for that amount of frames. Maybe relax it a little?

Overall, very nice though! Definitely gonna give you kudos during voting smile

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#8 06-01-2017 4:41 am

vicentebmello@yahoo.com.b
Registered: 06-01-2017
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Re: May_Baker wip

Did you received this animation?:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnFrltuQM3k

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