#1 04-21-2017 1:01 am

Randomations
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April 2017 WIP #1

I'm not too proud of it, but any pointers are needed and greatly appreciated. Also the animation program I'm using is pretty watered down, so there are things I cannot do, like putting my animation in stepped mode.

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#2 04-24-2017 2:05 pm

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Re: April 2017 WIP #1

It's a solid start! A few things to consider are over-acting, specifically the huge movement on the 1st character's arms. You want to push poses, but you also want to make sure you aren't moving things for the sake of movement. Right now the broad gesture of the first guy feels forced and unnatural, so toning it back a little will help give it a more solid, honest feel.

I like the cat, ha ha. Anyway, keep going!


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