#1 04-09-2017 6:21 pm

andreagulli89
Registered: 03-04-2013
Posts: 3

April 2017 - first entry!

Hello everyone!

This is my first time entering this competition smile Here's my first pass on this month's audio, it's a very rough animatic for me to understand the acting / first designs of the characters. All suggestions are super welcome!

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Thanks!

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#2 04-09-2017 9:53 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April 2017 - first entry!

I really like the "to imprison them" bit. Keep at it.

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#3 04-10-2017 4:23 pm

andreagulli89
Registered: 03-04-2013
Posts: 3

Re: April 2017 - first entry!

Hey Ivan, thanks for your comment! I'm actually unsure about that bit because I feel it's too descriptive maybe. I'm trying to keep things subtle, but it's so hard! smile
I really like your WIP!!

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#4 04-11-2017 8:37 pm

andreagulli89
Registered: 03-04-2013
Posts: 3

Re: April 2017 - first entry!

Hi again,

I changed the story a bit.. Now the guy is supposed to be a new clumsy guard who pretends to know what he's doing - hope it's clear. I think I like this version more. The acting didn't change too much though.

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Any feedback is highly appreciated!

- Andrea

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