#1 03-20-2017 4:55 pm

lekhashree
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 9

need your critiques _tiger walk

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haey guys i am a self taught animator ..this is my first try in a quadruped animation, need some help from u guys....please help me with your valuable comments...thank you.

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#2 03-21-2017 3:20 am

vimal
Registered: 09-26-2011
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Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

good start....bt it looks a bit rigid...and there are some jerks all around.... ALL THE BEST

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#3 03-21-2017 9:57 am

art-of-tennis
Registered: 01-31-2015
Posts: 17

Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

I believe that more side to side motion of both shoulders and hips could help you.  I'd also bump up your vertical translation.  Your posing on your front paws is a little off.  As with a bipedal walk I would try to get your weight over the foot as he enters his passing position of the cycle.  You want that paw underneath his shoulder mass more.

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#4 03-22-2017 1:51 pm

lekhashree
Registered: 03-20-2017
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Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

thanks a lot guys.....i am uploading the second version of it...please chk it out ...and give your feedbacks


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XggbR3prKPI

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#5 03-23-2017 6:47 am

vimal
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Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

can see good progress,,bt stl there are some issues....
after the passing pose legs front legs looks broken
that hump in his back ,it wont be viible all the time...it pops when that corresponding legs took weight nd it shoots down when that legs looses its weight.
poses are boken in back legs also,,,and there are some jerks all around...in legs,,tail
try to add some more weight in back legs....once it lands on the floor all those weight will b on that ankle part...

thats all i can see....stll its a good improvement...keep up the good work..ALL THE BEST

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#6 03-24-2017 12:32 pm

lekhashree
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 9

Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

https://youtu.be/MpEa9BxzFdA


thanks for your feedback guys...it really helped me a lot..i am uploading the updated version ..please check this too and give your valuable feedbacks

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#7 03-25-2017 2:34 am

vimal
Registered: 09-26-2011
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Re: need your critiques _tiger walk

much much better,,,but still there are some issues

that back leg that looks odd...that palm shape,,,take refference for that..its not looking nice.
that finger spread in back legs looks jerky,make it spread on ground impact properly..and smoothly...and make it visible like your front foot.
while passing your front foot is going below the ground level...chk it out
work on its tail..it lokks jerky..and its over all pose is seem a bit odd,,reduce that c curve a little bit.
after he lifts that front foot ,,there is a pop....take a good refference for that..and give a proper flow...
thats all i can see...ALL THE BEST,its comming so good..keep it up.

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