#1 02-12-2017 10:14 pm

ThePinkFrog
Registered: 02-11-2017
Posts: 7

February Competition WIP

This is what I have so far in terms of a block pass. The story is that they're talking and the girl realizes that the snake tank has no glass. When she asks the guy why there is no glass. He responds he took them out cause it's easier to clean. The girl starts to get scared cause the snake is not there in the tank, but free roaming around the house. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-zUJSdTCAs

I'm modeling a snake and going to rig it and animate it. I'm going to add to the background little by little. 

Feedback is helpful. smile   Thanks!!

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#2 02-17-2017 2:08 am

ThePinkFrog
Registered: 02-11-2017
Posts: 7

Re: February Competition WIP

Hello! This is an updated version on what i'm working on. I'm still working on making a snake to animate in the background. I'm also going to start animating the mouth and more face expressions next.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_5LbYa57RXI

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#3 02-19-2017 2:12 am

woodlandmermaid
Registered: 01-25-2017
Posts: 8

Re: February Competition WIP

Looking good so far. The only thing that I'm really questioning is how at the end Bonnie looks away from the snake after she sort of jumps. There doesn't seem to be any motivator to be looking off in that direction. I would think that she would be shocked about what she hears, and then look over towards the snake terrarium to check it. After, maybe glance away, but then end with her looking at the snake.

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#4 02-24-2017 6:20 pm

ThePinkFrog
Registered: 02-11-2017
Posts: 7

Re: February Competition WIP

Thanks for the feedback! smile

Here is another updated version of my animation. I finally added the snake in the background!! I'm still working on the lip sync and still fixing things here and there. Feedback is helpful! smile
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KddNa9bpIRM

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