#1 02-11-2017 5:08 pm

hrichmond
Registered: 02-09-2017
Posts: 9

February 2017 WIP Feedback for "Car Date"

This is my first pass of key poses for February 2017 competition.  Here is the video:

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Please feel free to leave feedback.

Last edited by hrichmond (02-14-2017 5:06 pm)

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#2 02-17-2017 1:14 am

lelostrzal
Registered: 02-12-2017
Posts: 14

Re: February 2017 WIP Feedback for "Car Date"

Interesting idea. I like it.
I think that at the end she turns her head down and stays down, making it more difficult to see her expression. One suggestion is to maybe just turn it up a little bit more at the end again.

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#3 02-18-2017 11:35 pm

hrichmond
Registered: 02-09-2017
Posts: 9

Re: February 2017 WIP Feedback for "Car Date"

Here is an update of my WIP.  I really appreciate the last feedback.  Please submit more.

https://youtu.be/sqlaJnfEqnE

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#4 02-19-2017 1:30 am

woodlandmermaid
Registered: 01-25-2017
Posts: 8

Re: February 2017 WIP Feedback for "Car Date"

Fun idea. At the beginning, you have Bonnie looking like she is sick and rolling her eyes. This idea works, but I think it would help if you gave her a little more time with her eyes locked on to the bird poo, so we have time to register what she is looking at. You might not even need the eye roll, if you have her look at what is currently in the car and flick her eyes up it might read better.

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#5 02-25-2017 10:38 pm

hrichmond
Registered: 02-09-2017
Posts: 9

Re: February 2017 WIP Feedback for "Car Date"

Here is my latest WIP. 

https://youtu.be/iAerlmzszD8

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