#1 06-22-2014 10:57 am

Tchoupinany
From: France
Registered: 11-30-2013
Posts: 34

Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

Hey everyone !

I need some comments, sentiments about my animation please. I had started the competition of november just one week before the deadline so I was unable to send it at time, and after I had a lot of stuff to do..

But now I finished it ! So please tell me if there is some things to ameliorate or change to do this better (or if it amazing like that (ha ha ha))

Thanks you for your time smile

here the Youtube link :

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#2 06-22-2014 11:33 am

romy
From: Germany
Registered: 11-20-2013
Posts: 151

Re: Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

hey Tchoupinany smile

first I'm very impressed that you have finished the work!!! smile
I like your animation and the acting - especially when she talkes directly to him and takes his hand.

is this your final framing? smile I think a closer camera would be great for this situation. smile


always keep calm...
and watch this video for a good laugh smile
http://www.ebaumsworld.com/video/watch/82261633/

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#3 06-22-2014 11:42 am

Tchoupinany
From: France
Registered: 11-30-2013
Posts: 34

Re: Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

Hey!
Thanks for your comment !

Yes it's the final framing.
When you talk about the camera more closer, you think it will better for the end of the animation (starting when she takes his hand for exemple) ?

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#4 06-22-2014 11:51 am

romy
From: Germany
Registered: 11-20-2013
Posts: 151

Re: Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

no, I mean the framing is overall to far away. you have to much room on the sides.
move the camera forward so you almost(!!) cut the head of the woman. and move it a bit to the left for the golden ratio. you can move the camera back a bit when the woman is walking to the man and if you want you can move it slowly a bit closer again, when she is taking his hand. smile
and maybe you play with the focal length.


always keep calm...
and watch this video for a good laugh smile
http://www.ebaumsworld.com/video/watch/82261633/

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#5 06-22-2014 11:53 am

Tchoupinany
From: France
Registered: 11-30-2013
Posts: 34

Re: Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

Ok, I'll try ! Thank you again smile

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#6 06-22-2014 1:29 pm

Tchoupinany
From: France
Registered: 11-30-2013
Posts: 34

Re: Comments on this animation of the dialogue of November please ?

Here, new camera and some corrections.Hope it's better like that smile

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