#1 06-06-2014 12:44 pm

mortalpoet
From: Portland, OR
Registered: 12-03-2008
Posts: 22

Your Comments Wanted on my entry Last Month

Great entries this month! Congrats to the winner! big_smile

This is my first time entering and I just wanted to get the forum's advice on how I can improve on it? I plan to go back and revise it to be better and appreciate the forum's wisdom on this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=09I8-TtRE90

Thank you!

-Jesse

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#2 06-06-2014 1:00 pm

Easy619
Registered: 12-15-2012
Posts: 672
Productive!

Re: Your Comments Wanted on my entry Last Month

The squirrel was done well. My only thing would be to keep the girl alive more. Other then that its good.


"Talent you have naturally. Skill is only developed by hours and hours and hours of beating on your craft." - Will Smith

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#3 06-07-2014 2:13 am

mortalpoet
From: Portland, OR
Registered: 12-03-2008
Posts: 22

Re: Your Comments Wanted on my entry Last Month

Thank you! Yeah, is agree that the girl needs more work. I also heard that the squirrel should turn before his line rather than during it.

Thanks for the feedback! smile

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