#1 01-17-2014 1:28 am

Jordan_W
Registered: 01-09-2014
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Jan2014 - Grim and Ghost WIP (Feedback please!)

Hello!
I'm an animation student, so I would really appreciate any feedback you could give me to improve it! Critique away! smile
So far it's still really rough- only some rough key frames and breakdowns- but here's my work in progress!

The characters are a female grim reaper, and a ghost (of a man who died in the bathroom). They're flying in a skull-shaped helicopter. Helicopter, for punny purposes!

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#2 01-18-2014 3:29 am

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Re: Jan2014 - Grim and Ghost WIP (Feedback please!)

I really like the composition of the final shot, nice job! Very well balanced with a great expression and pose. The cut to the skeleton is amusing too. Good luck with the rest of it, keep at it!


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#3 01-18-2014 11:44 pm

Jordan_W
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Re: Jan2014 - Grim and Ghost WIP (Feedback please!)

Thanks for the reply! smile
I reworked the last shot a few times in order to fit everything in well, so it's good to know it's finally working pretty well, ha ha
I'll definitely keep working at it, thank you!

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#4 01-30-2014 6:29 pm

Jordan_W
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Re: Jan2014 - Grim and Ghost WIP (Feedback please!)

Here's my second work in progress shot.

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I have some lipsyncs in there along with rough head movements, now to roughly animate the body. Maybe the secondary action if I've time.
This is my first time doing a head comp in flash (for the ghost), so especially if anyone has any tricks on how to use symbol animation and make it not seem so...stiff for my next attempt, please share! smile
Thanks for watching!

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