#1 01-10-2014 1:28 am

felixHonda
From: Chula Vista
Registered: 11-26-2013
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WIP - January 2014 - Extreme Aviaphobia

Here is my third submission into the club. I am still blocking out the body movements right now and deciding on the camera cuts. Also if there is time, I might make bonnie look a bit more like a flight attendant. But right now I'm just going to focus on the animation. Any suggestions?

               

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Description: A guy with a phobia is giving a flight attendant some trouble.

Experience: 6 to 7 months

Time taken: 5 days


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#2 01-29-2014 5:06 am

felixHonda
From: Chula Vista
Registered: 11-26-2013
Posts: 43

Re: WIP - January 2014 - Extreme Aviaphobia

Unfortunately I haven't been able to update my WIP this month due to other projects. But here is my current entry with all the blocking somewhat finished. Any critiques or thoughts to help improve this?

               

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#3 01-29-2014 8:17 am

Penzilla
Registered: 11-16-2012
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Re: WIP - January 2014 - Extreme Aviaphobia

This looks very solid! Having him up there is very funny. She doesn't have a lot of emphasize on "... or else I make you sit down!". Maybe she could try to pull him out of the compartment by his foot or so?


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#4 01-30-2014 5:02 am

felixHonda
From: Chula Vista
Registered: 11-26-2013
Posts: 43

Re: WIP - January 2014 - Extreme Aviaphobia

Penzilla: That would be pretty funny to do something like that! darn, unfortunately for this entry, I don't have that much time to really make any drastic changes. But thanks for the tip!


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