#1 03-05-2013 6:05 am

CGjobo
From: Australia
Registered: 12-08-2010
Posts: 21

March WIP book - Joe Toole

Thought I'd go for a slightly more subtle 'story' for this shot... by which I mean, doesn't really have much of a story to speak of at all. Kind of just trying to get my lipsync and basic acting a bit better.
Psychologist is saying he's happy by not asking questions he doesn't want to know the answers to.
Malcolm rig used. WIP. Crits and comments welcome.

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#2 03-05-2013 11:21 am

MarkPeart
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Registered: 09-02-2011
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Re: March WIP book - Joe Toole

Hey dude good to see your entering as well this month smile You should get your progress at some point on youanimator.com good for more feedback. Good luck!

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#3 03-05-2013 7:35 pm

cbarnard
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Re: March WIP book - Joe Toole

looks good so far, that first shot could be pulled in a bit, it's kinda hard to see their mouths. You have to compensate for how small the video is going to be when judging time comes around, the first thing people see is usually going to determine their interest, and if you can't see the mouth too well then it's kind of a bummer. Looking good so far.

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#4 03-05-2013 8:14 pm

ianalexh
Registered: 01-05-2013
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Re: March WIP book - Joe Toole

It's hard since I can't stop on a single frame, but my only comment is watch the transition in the line "How YOU live such a happy life?" Yellow shirt goes straight across with his head, and it could raise potential problems for the body-head animation later on. This is cool so far!

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#5 03-08-2013 8:43 am

CGjobo
From: Australia
Registered: 12-08-2010
Posts: 21

Re: March WIP book - Joe Toole

Second pass blocking.

Thanks for the nots ianalexh, cbarnard and MARK~! TNK buddy! eheheh....
I think I managed to tackle all of them, but there should be a whole bunch more in this next update.

Anyway, added blocked lip sync. Next onto a little more blocking then first pass splinning. Which is always, always fun.

Again, comments and crits welcome smile

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#6 03-13-2013 1:29 pm

CGjobo
From: Australia
Registered: 12-08-2010
Posts: 21

Re: March WIP book - Joe Toole

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Slight update.
Started splinning.

Comments and crits welcome.


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