#1 03-05-2013 6:04 am

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03/13 3rd Pass

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I'm keeping this bone simple until I know how much time I can spare.

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#2 03-05-2013 9:01 am

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Re: 03/13 3rd Pass

Hey you've got pretty nice gestures at several points. But I think what this piece lacks is story? I know its in a park, but what is it VISUALLY that sets this bloke to be the sagely, cool guy that he is and the other fellow as just another hick living out his daily life?

I hope it helps! Best of luck!

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#3 03-06-2013 6:59 am

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Re: 03/13 3rd Pass

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Did some tweaking with the timing.  Not quite satisfied with it yet.

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#4 03-17-2013 2:21 am

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Re: 03/13 3rd Pass

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Man, this is so much harder than the previous one I tried.  It's so damned low-key! tongue


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