#1 03-02-2013 9:26 am

Kuma-san
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WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Hi everyone,

I've made a little storyboard for this month's audio clip. If anyone's got any ideas on how I can push it further, it'd be greatly appreciated!

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#2 03-02-2013 6:43 pm

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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Great concept so far!

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#3 03-03-2013 12:38 am

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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Superb concept. what a paradox

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#4 03-03-2013 1:55 am

Kuma-san
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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Aww Gee. Thanks guys!

Cheers!

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#5 03-03-2013 2:10 am

ianalexh
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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Cool concept!

Only comment from this is to be careful of the movement in "How you live?" At this stage it seems all over the place, not fluid.

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#6 03-04-2013 4:09 pm

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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

I wants to make a little storyboard for this month's audio clip.

breath test

Last edited by Shoyeb56564 (03-30-2013 6:43 am)

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#7 03-04-2013 4:18 pm

Kuma-san
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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Thanks ianalexh! Yeah, I'm in the midst of figuring that out.

@Shoyeb56564: Go for it! Best of luck!

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#8 03-04-2013 9:54 pm

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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Be careful about continuity, it seems like the soldier turns to the right in the first view, but then the opposite way after the cut. Though I might just be super tired and my eyes are playing tricks on me. smile

Good luck with your entry! Are you going to keep it 2D like the Storyboard?


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#9 03-05-2013 5:39 am

Kuma-san
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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

Hi JKR, Yeah! I just realised that, haha. I'm probably gonna do it in 3D. Will be posting an updated storyboard later today!

Cheers!

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#10 03-05-2013 10:58 am

Kuma-san
Registered: 10-27-2010
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Re: WIP Mar 2013 - Prison Life

So I was tweaking around with some of the comments I received, and if all goes well, its on to blocking!

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As always, crits and cookies are most welcomed! big_smile

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