#1 10-09-2012 11:01 am

MjakaA
From: Indonesia
Registered: 08-07-2012
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October Competition_WIP

Hi....
my progress for this month.......thanx for your time....

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#2 10-09-2012 12:10 pm

PowerStride3D
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Re: October Competition_WIP

Great start but you may want to look at the guy with the dark hair at 0:07 it seems to be a bit floaty, play it back a few times and also play it in reverse a good way of checking to see if everything is working properly kind of like flipping a canvas when doing a digital painting in photoshop to see if the proportions are working out smile Hope this was helpful


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#3 10-09-2012 4:57 pm

kpatel
From: India
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Re: October Competition_WIP

nice start,  i like to say that  try to reduce to may gesture at a time. and head movement is to much uncertain for the old man. I know its in progress so of course the guy need lots of work.  hope it makes sense.


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#4 10-09-2012 6:26 pm

Karrey
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Re: October Competition_WIP

Love it this far! smile I love some of the old guys poses. I think it's worth a try to maybe stay in one of the poses for a couple of more frames. A bit the same thing kpatel is implying. But I really love the gestures and acting so it's all about tweaking, really!

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#5 10-13-2012 8:05 am

MjakaA
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Re: October Competition_WIP

> PowerStride3D.....thank you for sharing your knowledge , i would love to try in the next progress....
> kpatel.....yeah, i will check it again.....thank you, heheh
> Karrey....thank you

....and here's next progress before i read  the comment from you guys heheh


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#6 10-13-2012 8:08 am

piyush mehta
Registered: 10-05-2011
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Re: October Competition_WIP

looks good so far

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#7 10-13-2012 12:23 pm

PowerStride3D
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Re: October Competition_WIP

Brilliant progress, now if you look at the shoulder movement on the old guy it seems to be a bit movey (if that is a word or not) try to tone that down a bit. wink


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#8 10-14-2012 10:50 pm

Duffalo
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Re: October Competition_WIP

I'd say the texture of the back wall is really distracting.

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#9 10-15-2012 5:45 am

Pb-practicebowling
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Re: October Competition_WIP

I must say i agree with you Duffalo. The texture have a lot of tooth and i wouldn't put it in any back drop.


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#10 10-16-2012 4:05 am

MjakaA
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Registered: 08-07-2012
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Re: October Competition_WIP

Thanks everyone, i'll give my progress as soon as possible.....
> Pb-practicebowling....bahahahaha, tooth....

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#11 10-16-2012 4:46 pm

MjakaA
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Registered: 08-07-2012
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Re: October Competition_WIP

thank you for helping me till now....heheh......next progress

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#12 10-17-2012 9:03 pm

rmartell22
From: New York
Registered: 10-05-2012
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Re: October Competition_WIP

looks pretty good

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#13 10-19-2012 5:16 am

AFranchini
Registered: 10-18-2012
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Re: October Competition_WIP

Great work man love the werewolf transition and flows very nicely.

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