#1 09-23-2012 11:45 am

david5
Registered: 04-14-2012
Posts: 68

sep_comp_c&c_welcome

               

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here is a wip for my entrie all comments welcome

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#2 09-24-2012 3:32 pm

s.mani.1984
Registered: 09-15-2012
Posts: 4

Re: sep_comp_c&c_welcome

Hi David,

Here are the few things I noticed :

* The lip sync is not proper, I hope you are yet to work on that that smile
* The body looks very static and robotic, give smooth transitions between the poses.
   Even when there are no changes in the pose, give moving hold.
   There should be very little movement so that it does not look as if its dead
* At the beginning (when she says "May be tomorrow really isn't coming"), the eyes goes left and right.
   As a viewer, I would think that she is talking to some one, so she must be looking at that person when ever she   lifts her head up

Mani

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#3 09-24-2012 5:23 pm

david5
Registered: 04-14-2012
Posts: 68

Re: sep_comp_c&c_welcome

thanks mani
I am yety to finish of the lip sync
thanks for the comments really helpful

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