#1 09-18-2012 7:54 am

sloik_13@wp.pl
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to live a little ...

Hey guys .. this is my first time on 11 second club ..
Here's my first bloking pass for september 2012

https://vimeo.com/49662831

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#2 09-18-2012 8:29 am

Ohjin
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Re: to live a little ...

IMO I think there are too many poses. maybe take a couple or few out.

But see what other people say.

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#3 09-18-2012 2:38 pm

jordanpaulmorris
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Re: to live a little ...

i hava problem with it.....with it being such a emotional piece, facial expressions are what would appeal to many viewers....and you don't get that with the rig your using.....also think why is she saying that, whats her story and the concept to appeal to the audience


animation to me is a way of making the impossible.....possible, that is why i believe it is the greatest art form there is

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#4 09-19-2012 11:37 am

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Re: to live a little ...

ok gys thanks for your C&C's
@Ohjin yeah thats what Iusually do in first blocking - putting as muchposes as I can just to see what's working whats not working ... I gues there will be a few less ...
@Jordan - facial expresions are coming .. this first pass I try to express as much as I can with body language , and then add expresions on top of that ... Yeah rig was a bad choice - im going for Moon rig form resources ... and yeah stroy behind it .. im kinna thinking where to go with it ... for now its just blocking ...

any ways thanks both of ya ... progress coming soon wink

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