#1 09-08-2012 1:48 pm

creative.stinger
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May be i die

Hello 11SC,

I am done with the blocking pass. just need your suggestions if it is coming along or it need some changes

please critic

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#2 09-09-2012 1:16 am

david alvarez
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Re: May be i die

Very cool perfomance, the blocking pass looks awesome!

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#3 09-09-2012 3:45 am

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Re: May be i die

blocking is great so far. looking forward to see what you do with the male character.

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#4 09-09-2012 1:38 pm

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Re: May be i die

Thanks @ david alvarez & TaiBo

am still working on girl character and in next version i'll try to complete the both characters blocking.


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#5 09-10-2012 3:35 am

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Re: May be i die

Hi sir nice performance smile


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#6 09-10-2012 7:27 pm

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Pips wrote:

Hi sir nice performance smile

Thank you @Pips


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#7 09-10-2012 7:30 pm

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Re: May be i die

Here's the another update:

refined blocking with more inbetweens

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#8 09-10-2012 9:51 pm

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Re: May be i die

Hi Creative, the blocking looks really nice. From the performance point of view, she is emotionally very weak at the moment and i think your walk forward is pretty strong for that. Probably you might want to reduce the steps or cheat it so that the intensity matches with the tone of the dialogue. its something to think about smile great work on the blocking.

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#9 09-11-2012 5:13 pm

creative.stinger
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Re: May be i die

pkeviv wrote:

Hi Creative, the blocking looks really nice. From the performance point of view, she is emotionally very weak at the moment and i think your walk forward is pretty strong for that. Probably you might want to reduce the steps or cheat it so that the intensity matches with the tone of the dialogue. its something to think about smile great work on the blocking.

Thanks @pkeviv,
I'll keep these notes in mind and i'll shoot a new playblast soon.


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#10 09-11-2012 5:38 pm

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Re: May be i die

ive enjoyed the last part of it. 268 and on i believe is very smart i think. I once wanted you to nugde alittle harder
but now i think its ok for the beginning of her walk. peace

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#11 09-12-2012 12:31 pm

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Re: May be i die

great start! looking for update

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#12 09-17-2012 1:41 pm

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Re: May be i die

Really nice, cant wait to see the finished thing.

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#13 09-18-2012 7:27 am

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Re: May be i die

i like it congrats
but i m little confuse about first part
i think you put his one hand on her shoulder and i think when
girls move so boy hand will just slip don't make a curve (boy hand)
best of luck smile

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#14 09-18-2012 3:03 pm

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Re: May be i die

Hey looking good I think you are off to a great start.

-I think it might be cool if maybe she shrugged him away on the word coming.
-Also I feel like she would stay in that pose where her face is faced upward with her eyes closed all the way through " just maybe"
-Also think u should get rid of the pose where she looks back at him during the word maybe so u can leave that pose for the very end.

Keep it up and good luck

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#15 09-23-2012 11:52 am

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Re: May be i die

Thank you everyone for your useful comments and sorry for the late update was busy with work.

Here is what i hsve done so far. lipsync is still off. comments and critiques are welcome.

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#16 09-24-2012 3:33 am

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Re: May be i die

Wow simply nice smile


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