#1 09-01-2012 6:43 am

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What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Yay..... in for the this month as well smile

Here's my idea smile or plot. The set is gonna be a post apocalyptic room with everything ruined...  so we have this gal who is surviving all alone and a group or a single guy comes to grab all her rations... and this is the last dialog she delivers... trying to talk him over .....


Probably will upload a pic of the setup soon smile  Excited cause first time gonna handle a female character big_smile


Here is the work i have got so far ... created the setup ...
http://i.imgur.com/8rapZ.jpg

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#2 09-01-2012 1:31 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Cool idea onetwo! I like it.
I know it's super early days and you may have just put the girl in there in 30 seconds as a stand in, but the pose needs some work. One of her feet would have the heel on the ground and the toe in the hair. If you try to sit like that with both feet planted it kind of straining after a while. Also her right wrist looks broken.
Like I said you may have just put her in that position to be a stand in, but you always want to make sure your poses look good. You might as well do it all the time because there's no such thing as too much practice when it comes to animation.
Looking forward to your progress, I could see the improvements last month.

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#3 09-01-2012 2:29 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Thanks wellings smile yup its just rough pose to get the idea ... this pose wont be there cause i have a total different idea on how the scene unfolds smile but ya your right ... i did some broken joint poses tongue have to learn to block my poses appealing smile from right now smile even its not gonna be there big_smile

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#4 09-01-2012 2:59 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

wow started right away....i like the excitement...


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#5 09-01-2012 10:23 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

I really like your idea and looking forward to watching it develop!

As for the layout, the value of the sunlight hitting the mattress and the blue sky on the right is a little too high.  It might be directing my eye in unintended places:  when I look at the composition,
I first look at her,
then my eye drops to that sunlight (and I ask myself its meaning),
then I look at the second character's hand,
then his body,
then up at that blue sunlight.

Given the context, perhaps drop in the bg a stereotypical post-apocalyptic images to quickly establish the scene for the viewer?   You know, ruined skyscaper with vegetation?  Right now, being a city person in a world-wide depressed economy, I read it as "homeless person who hit bottom and wants a new chance at life."


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#6 09-02-2012 3:47 am

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Haha smile Thanks pollywoggles smile Points taken will do the corrections well since you mentioned it plants are obvious i guess smile will add a few and then the person whose hand is seen would be holding a knife ... im just working on the composition a bit more ... will throw in few bottles and other props .... Well as u said i just wanted to show what i was upto smile

Thanks for the ideas smile will post another update soon smile

And oh ya ... i have no clue about lighting that is just Maya Physical Sun and Sky smile

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#7 09-02-2012 7:42 am

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Hey,

love that idea and setup.
But i thought really light is distracting.
but keep experimenting with that light thing.

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#8 09-12-2012 3:46 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

@Greenberet thanks a lot will look into the lighting smile

Shoooooo.... after enough of reference videos got the blocking done smile for phase 1 smile

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Do note the fingers are still not animated and they do penetrate the characters leg and bed ... will be fixed smile

Critics welcomed

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#9 09-12-2012 4:09 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

think you need to work on the composition a bit. She's currently very far from the camera, makes it hard to see. And, following the rule of thirds, I would raise her up a bit so she's not in the middle of the frame vertically
something like this maybe-
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/kyleGarrett/composition1.jpg


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#10 09-12-2012 4:18 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

WOW !! Thanks a lot bro will change it  ... but what about the starting scene ... she's back walking and then sits down sad thats y i had to frame it like that .... i thought of cutting the camera angles but i don't know how it would look ...


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#11 09-12-2012 5:05 pm

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

I don't think you need to show her walking back and sitting down. I think your shot could start from the sitting position and still work well, if not better.

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#12 09-12-2012 5:06 pm

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Thanks wellings will post an update soon smile


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#13 09-13-2012 9:18 am

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Changed the Composition a bit closer focusing on the gal ....

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version 2 more close

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Which is better

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#14 09-17-2012 9:11 am

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Re: What do i have got to loose.... September 2012

Here is WIP 3 smile critics welcomed smile


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