#1 08-19-2012 8:22 am

babji3
From: india
Registered: 04-07-2011
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moral stories_wip

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please critic.thanks


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#2 08-24-2012 9:02 am

babji3
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Re: moral stories_wip

how it so far?


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#3 08-29-2012 2:26 pm

Skyefish
From: South Africa
Registered: 03-24-2012
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Re: moral stories_wip

erm dude it looks good but if you are planning on entering for the august competition i think you have the wrong clip. check out the latest audio file to make sure. will crit this anyway :-) it seems to be a bit too subtle. maybe add a swing to the side with the right arm after it does that forward movement with the fingers. also speed up the arm with the bite. in general i think some more upper body/chest movement will liven it up plenty. good job and good luck! :-P


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#4 08-30-2012 2:32 am

babji3
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Re: moral stories_wip

i know it is not the aug competition.but am trying my skills.thanks


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