#1 08-13-2012 1:42 pm

flipitieflop
Registered: 09-29-2008
Posts: 11

August WIP

this is my rough idea for this months comp

a man talking to this child, while he is mopping the floor of a stage

child is asleep on his back in a sling

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#2 08-13-2012 2:18 pm

babji3
From: india
Registered: 04-07-2011
Posts: 323
Productive!

Re: August WIP

keep going


Animation is an art of life.

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#3 08-13-2012 2:52 pm

flipitieflop
Registered: 09-29-2008
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Re: August WIP

blocking out in maya

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#4 08-14-2012 9:09 pm

pollywoggles
From: Los Angeles
Registered: 06-24-2012
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Re: August WIP

I like where you are going.  My only suggestion is that I would like to see more of the story in the blocking.  We're watching a guy mop (which, so far, looks good), but it really is just that -- a guy mopping.  It feels vanilla; it doesn't really have more of a story.  It feels you could attach that blocking to any sound, and it would work just as well.

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#5 08-29-2012 6:43 pm

Skyefish
From: South Africa
Registered: 03-24-2012
Posts: 29

Re: August WIP

nice strong poses there but im gonna have to agree with the above. also in the end he has to stop mopping for a bit to give more emphasis on that last phrase. want to see this one when its done. :-P


i will sleep when i'm dead :-P

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