#1 08-12-2012 4:22 pm

alteregogi
Registered: 06-05-2012
Posts: 2

August 2012 WIP -

hy everyone. this is my first entry on 11secondclub...

it is about the old man,when he failed for reach her dream

but its still layout stage.
i'll update ASAP...

comment and critique are very welcome...

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#2 08-14-2012 10:39 pm

pollywoggles
From: Los Angeles
Registered: 06-24-2012
Posts: 89

Re: August 2012 WIP -

I like what you are doing so far.  It seems like just a few too many shots, without much motivation as to why we are changing. 

For me, I think it works well with just two shots:  that first establishing shot, and then the final over-the-shoulder reveal. 

With the first shot, you could pull in tighter, as the character speaks, then at the end, go to the over-the-shoulder.


Paul

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#3 08-29-2012 6:39 pm

Skyefish
From: South Africa
Registered: 03-24-2012
Posts: 29

Re: August 2012 WIP -

hey its cool and i like the general atmosphere. just watch out for floating and put animation in step mode when youre blocking it in future. cool keep it up! :-P


i will sleep when i'm dead :-P

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#4 08-30-2012 1:47 pm

alteregogi
Registered: 06-05-2012
Posts: 2

Re: August 2012 WIP -

stuff sad
i can't finish it >< . . . i've really busy with my works sad
maybe next competition... ><

thanks all for your comment..

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#5 08-31-2012 11:50 am

Skyefish
From: South Africa
Registered: 03-24-2012
Posts: 29

Re: August 2012 WIP -

darn! Yeah animators really don't have a life ahahahah! Look forward to the next one though :-P


i will sleep when i'm dead :-P

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