#1 08-07-2012 5:17 pm

drslater
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August Competition wip

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#2 08-07-2012 9:09 pm

JKR
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Re: August Competition wip

Nice! I like that you're doing something unique. Though it is still "old character next to young character" it is different enough that you want to watch.

One thing to keep in mind is the weight. On the large character, he has almost all his weight on his back arms. BUT when he lifts his arms to put them behind his head, 100% of that weight hits his abs (or those muscles anyway!). It's very tough to hold that position unless you're in great shape, and I don't feel like the blobby-fellow is in great shape considering his, well, shape. smile

Just keep that in mind. Always consider gravity, especially when doing 2D.

I wrote an article about it a while back, and though it looks a little like I'm just plugging my own work, here's the link: http://www.animatorisland.com/?p=875 If it helps you, that's what it's THERE for. That's why I wrote it. And anyone who rolls their eyes that I keep sharing the stuff I wrote can keep rolling their eyes, I wrote it to share! tongue


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#3 08-07-2012 11:23 pm

drslater
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Re: August Competition wip

thanks for the critique

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#4 08-09-2012 6:05 am

drslater
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Re: August Competition wip

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Updated work in progress; still have to do a few more things to the animation

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#5 08-09-2012 1:35 pm

rsaenz15x
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Re: August Competition wip

Really like the concept so far.
Although the little one seems not very interested on what the bigger guy has to say. Maybe you can make them both interact a little bit more.

Good Luck!
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#6 08-11-2012 8:16 am

drslater
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Re: August Competition wip

Thanks for the feedback.

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