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blind old bicycle man....his last race .... just before finish he has accident. he is trying to find some tools to fix his bike...???? no !!!! he was so old and blind that he didn't see FINISH LINE, he is looking for his glases... what for? propobly to find proper tools to fix his bike ..so. . how did he cycle ? (blind...)
- From: Batangas, Philippines
- Registered: 02-16-2012
- Posts: 66
Hey, love your take on the audio.. good start as well.
I think maybe you can make him do some quick glances to the finish line, like checking if anyone's gotten ahead of the race, while looking in his toolbox.
That way the audience will feel his "concerns" at the moment.
About the glasses, can you maybe replace it with something else?
Maybe a wheel? lol, now how did it fit in there but it could open a possibility for a gag right?
Besides, I think the audience will have a hard time digesting what the glasses are for.
Go for a tool that will obviously help him fix his bike.
And make the damage on his bike more obvious, make it look like it just happened recently.
And the girl, is she part of the crowd watching?
A picture is worth a thousand words...
3d animation is worth
about two million words a minute...
hi there . .thank you for your help...
this is just rough sketch to show the idea .. its not the key poses
laurencekit07 - you may be right.. glass may confuse people..
idea with looking back on some other cyclist is good...
i actually want to add much more Key poses than on this short animatic, and this looking back maybe one of them..
generally he will be in a hurry...
yeap.. girl is part of some crowd i think. . she saw what happen and she came here.
thanx again for your effort.