(I don't think the first fist slam to the table is needed?)

Please keep your progress in one thread. That makes it easier for everyone to follow. Thanks!

Good start, but now you animation looks like liquid flow, you should make more pauses, much more pauses i mean)))

vinogradovs wrote:

Good start, but now you animation looks like liquid flow, you should make more pauses, much more pauses i mean)))

I think he s right you should have more poses and without distorting the face.

All the best

Right after the line "... pretending like you're tough" the left character slams his fist on the 'table' (don't know what to call it ) It might give greater emphasis if he should hit it right on the word 'tough'.

getting better and better every iteration!
(careful with holding that "fist" pose for too long though)

I like this one, its a cool idea. The animation itself seems to get floaty though after the 3 second mark

I still think is to much the head stretch. Nice progress anyway.

Hi to everyone!!! My work continued... I need your comments.... 

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Thanks... And it`s my entry now:) And unfortunately i can`t encode frames at quick time... 

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Last edited by pavlushka (05-21-2012 1:53 pm)

The fellow talking is excellent...the one listening seems slow and sluggish still. I think he should be nodding in agreement almost from the beginning (if he really is agreeing with the speaker) or if the listener is tired of hearing his friend beat a dead horse, it should reflect something else...like boredom.

The listener is all about emotion through reaction....the speaker is all about emotion through words.

It seems to be little floaty....
i don know exactly which frame but when he closes his right fist, u can see that it gets snapped within a single frame......
Nice work....