Oh JKR, I believe you're right, I see if I can still do some changes, but the last video has some changes in the actual scream as well, so I will rather go on from there

Id try and make some of the poses bigger. Frame 18 I believe, is a squash. Raise the shoulders to help sell the action.

You may find some interesting notes on here.

http://www.navone.org/HTML/Tutorial_DashTake.htm

Unless you are going to add drag to them, Id shrink the size of the boobs. With how big they are, you are making a statement. I don't mean just because they are boobs, I mean as an animator you have made a conscious decision. Does their size add anything at present. I don't think so.

Also I have a question, which may help to push it to the next level. Who is the girl, what is she thinking and what is she reacting to?

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@blackbird. Thank you for your comment. I believe we will back back to simplier exercises soon. However, mini-challenge 27 is a smile. We just hope to provide a range of simplier exercises as a warm up for the main competition. If people are going to animate an 11 Second Club audio, we hope to provide the opportunity to practice an emotion change first.

Wow, that's just terrific, wolfor. So good.

I guess I'm a little bit late, but here's my scene. What you guys think?

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Thanks wolfor, mucho appreciato! Haha And I agree with you, the timing seems a little off, indeed.

I'll work on it!