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#26 02-19-2012 1:58 pm
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Oh JKR, I believe you're right, I see if I can still do some changes, but the last video has some changes in the actual scream as well, so I will rather go on from there
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#27 02-19-2012 4:26 pm
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
any comments?
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#28 02-19-2012 4:48 pm
- thelittlepenguin84
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Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Id try and make some of the poses bigger. Frame 18 I believe, is a squash. Raise the shoulders to help sell the action.
You may find some interesting notes on here.
http://www.navone.org/HTML/Tutorial_DashTake.htm
Unless you are going to add drag to them, Id shrink the size of the boobs. With how big they are, you are making a statement. I don't mean just because they are boobs, I mean as an animator you have made a conscious decision. Does their size add anything at present. I don't think so.
Also I have a question, which may help to push it to the next level. Who is the girl, what is she thinking and what is she reacting to?
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#29 02-19-2012 8:23 pm
- BartekO
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Re: MC 26: The silent scream
the faces will be changed for better, I'll give it some more time now. Maybe I should do it all on twos?
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#32 02-20-2012 7:03 am
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
thanks
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#33 02-20-2012 2:33 pm
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
big.boss wrote:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10109301/mc%2026%20last%201.mp4
thanks
Heh, much less distracting now.
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#34 02-20-2012 6:02 pm
- thelittlepenguin84
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Re: MC 26: The silent scream
@blackbird. Thank you for your comment. I believe we will back back to simplier exercises soon. However, mini-challenge 27 is a smile. We just hope to provide a range of simplier exercises as a warm up for the main competition. If people are going to animate an 11 Second Club audio, we hope to provide the opportunity to practice an emotion change first.
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#35 02-20-2012 7:52 pm
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Hi!
Great work, guys!
And another half hour did me some good
Next time I'll be faster, hopefully

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#36 02-20-2012 11:01 pm
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Wow, that's just terrific, wolfor. So good.
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#37 02-21-2012 12:29 am
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
thanks! I still feel a little jerk in the head movement, but I couldn't find it in a rush, and now I don't have any more time for it
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#38 02-28-2012 6:26 am
- PedroHMendes
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Re: MC 26: The silent scream
I guess I'm a little bit late, but here's my scene. What you guys think?
Eu gosto de feijão.
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#39 02-28-2012 9:28 am
Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Hi!
Looks good, and on an animation exercise you're never too late. I just feel that the anticipation is a few frames too slow, but that's just my opinion
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#40 02-29-2012 3:49 am
- PedroHMendes
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Re: MC 26: The silent scream
Thanks wolfor, mucho appreciato! Haha And I agree with you, the timing seems a little off, indeed.
I'll work on it!
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