yduaz! whats going on man.. ok so i checked out your first take.. lets see ...


1   when he comes into shot.. it looks weird that he is gliding def wanna show the weight of him running in..

2   After he touches the wall and pulls away from it.. his whole torso goes completely still

3. After he grabs the p hone and does that swoop to lean on the wall. i think the swoop can be a little be more faster. 

the end is pretty good when he is startled.


So far those are the major things i see wrong with it.. work your way through those.. and post another version up

hey if you can get hold of a frame counter for your playblasts that would def be cool

good work man keep at it

Well, here's the update:

http://video.google.es/videoplay?docid= … 3580434292

I tried to give some variation to the glide you suggested, there wasn't much time to play with so I basicaly added an up and down position and played with the timing on those. The swoop definately looks better quicker and added some motion in the excited pose. I tweaked a couple of facial poses and the timing on some others besides your suggestions.

I added the frame counter using this script by Mark Tsang in case any 3dsmax users were wondering.

Thanks again!

Hey damncreative, didn't notice that and you're absolutely right... I'll get on it and keep you guys updated

Thanks!