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September competition

by NN

Final Rating: 3.26. Finished 97 out of 128 entries.

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Animator: NN

Description: Suggestions, something, i want to learn...thanks for watch it :)

Experience: 1 month learning basic things

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Raphael Blanchet:

Nice concept. I think working on your breakdowns and the timing and spacing of things would go a long way in helping the movements feel less linear.

Eric Solomon:

the arm on the table seems stiff when being dragged towards the person