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Dialogue between brothers

by 刘伟

Final Rating: 6.51. Finished 10 out of 128 entries.

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Animator: 刘伟

Description: Dialogue between brothers, in the suspect and wronged to distinguish the true and false of each other's speech.

Experience: 3

Time taken: 19

Comments:

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Laura Fuentes:

The body moves great but the mouth doesn't match the audio

Samuel Bourland:

There's too much movements to get a read on the face. Some great animation going on throughout! But it's just too much. Preston Blair called it "ants in the pants syndrome".

Lea:

The body acting is great but the lipsync doesn't really match up. Maybe do another pass on it, really nail the shot?

Daniel Olivas:

The "yeah I took it" is a little too fast with the hands

Krios Menoti:

nice work on the hands/body language

Mohamed Achref Hadda:

i like the stress you feel in the red guy but the lips sinc has a lot of problems keep it up

Florian Linet:

nice ! though lips seems strange at moments and the end fells weird