Final Rating: 3.05. Finished 81 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Ellora

Description: This is my finished animation for this months competition, that I am doing for my Animation course at college.

Experience: 1 1/2 years animating student

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Jordan Lewers:

Whatever it was that fell on the ground (balloon maybe?) distracted me from the acting

Çağtay Kubilay Güraras:

I think you should focus on the movement before the lipsync. Keep working!

Hanne Dewachter:

Well, I think you can draw, but for an animation to be an animation you need more than a drawn still image with a moving mouth on it.. I'd love to see some gestures in there.

Byron Pockrandt:

Nice lip sync. I would like to see more poses. I would also like to see more happiness instead of robotic look on the last pose where she says, "Exciting".

John Sloan:

The mouth seems to be floating. The characters arnt moving at all.