Final Rating: 5.65. Finished 27 out of 164 entries.

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Animator: Rotimi Emmanuel Olowu

Description: Crazy mechanic uses plutonium powered machine.

Experience: still in college

Time taken: 6 hours

Comments:

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Nicole Brettell:

Crazy comedy... Thought the short guy that looks like Mario was a goblin with his back turned though.

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Definitely like the drawings and the setup. Doc's hand blur into plutonium is nice. Marty's move at "nuclear" is late.

Gestures do not always seem motivated, eg, hand at back of head which is repeated. Find the exact right gesture coming from his mind and move into it slow, then keep it there for emphasis.

Good work!

Terressa:

Both characters are getting cropped and feels too cramped, I would pull the camera back so that doesn't happen. The Marty character's actions feel too repetitive, especially when grabbing his neck, try using different, more dynamic poses. Both characters are too vertical. The squash and stretch and arching movements are very strong.