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Plutonium Powered Teddy

by Mike Lewis

Final Rating: 3.83. Finished 90 out of 164 entries.

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Animator: Mike Lewis

Description: Marty wonders what makes this teddy so great. And when he finds out, his reaction could be the end of him.

Experience: 5 months

Time taken: 4 weeks on and off

Comments:

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Dylon Valjalo:

I really liked the very cartoony and stretched movements that were in here, though I feel that they might have been misused at certain times. At frames 66-100 I feel that that expression and movement was too drastic for something that was said so calmly. I also feel that the last jump at frame 369 was off on the audio and his reaction. Overall i do think it was a solid piece.

Stanley Watt:

Entertaining, but a bit over-acted. The characters seem floppy and puppet-like rather than living. Balance issues, these may be stylistic choices however.

Ramsey Parks:

I feel like the jumps were really unnecessary and the second jump he could have jumped backwards to show fear of the object.

Nicole Brettell:

Don't see a cute teddy being nuclear...

Louis Parker:

I liked the movements even though they didn't seem need so much. The same effort could have been put in movement that matched the dialog. Good job though!

Gabriel:

Bodies seem to float... timing needs work...use more holds!

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Like the two sides of table concept.

Camera too distant. Good posing ideas. Need better spine work. The legs up and kicking is good, but only once. Watch arcs.