No Mystery in this Murder

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished: 85 out of 143 entries.
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Animator: Kwa Wei Lam

Description: The solution can't get any more obvious than that!

Experience: A few months.

Time taken: Two weeks to make, two weeks to tweak.

Comments:

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Andrew:

Work on the sync especially when she says "I killed him!". If it doesn't look right, it distracts from the rest of the animation which, in this case is pretty good.

Adriel Restrepo:

Nice work. I Try to make the transitions more quicker between the hand and arm movements.

Elaine:

The expression on the dead guy is quite funny, I missed it the first time because I was watching the talking characters.

There is something a little awkward about the hand/arm position on the final pose. The way the lady's hand tilts off the arm makes it feel like she is not quite connecting to the other character. You might have her grasp a little higher on his shoulder.

David Higgins:

A little floaty

Kasey McIntosh:

The lady looks kinda weird at the end, her eyebrows say angry but her mouth says happy.

abhijit:

work more on lip sync.

Hernán Bruna:

More work in the poses, they are not too strong

Daniel Erwin:

great staging and story decisions

Geoff Clark:

The staging here was confusing to me; the girl at first seems to be far away, due to the size of the male's head. Acting was good though.

Kwa Wei Lam:

Need to smoothen out animation a little more.

Matthieu Delaere:

I love the dead man's expression. Try to fix some little things in the complete animation.