mark whitcombe:

dont think all the clip got on there.
ahh its all there now -(anotherday)
timing of the poses is all there and hiting key points in the audio.

off topic for a sec:
me and mr biped dont get on very well, and i dont like cs biped's methods of controlling the interpolation from key to key.
but thats just me.

Erik Griott:

i thought you had more than this finished? why is it not the whole clip? todd didnt move at all, and jacobim still looks really floaty. although you did polish that table slap nicely, it doesnt outweigh the rest of your scene.

Taber Dunipace:

Technical problems eh? For what you have, there are too many gestures going on and a lack of fundamentals. The animation quality is fair, but if you work harder next time, I think you can do better!

Carlos Fins:

A lot of movement/too many poses throughout the main piece of dialogue.

Aaron Clement:

Shack was good... Did you run out of time on this one... Todd wasn't moving at all... at first I thought it was apart of the gag.

Noah Arntson:

What is he doing standing at a urinal?

Emmanuel:

hmm needs more work. The gesture on jacobin is okay. Finish it out and see how it looks.

Nanda van Dijk:

i suggest you work out your poses a little better, try and acting it out yourself and look what feals natural.

Damon Smith:

Pelvic thrust seemed a bit out of place.

Geordie Martinez:

1 star. use a rig with a face for these. That's where the emotion is.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort man!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

First of all use a character, don't just use bones, there are plenty of them out there. Get your hands dirty with some facial animation. The poses are not bad and there's some good timing sense though, but there's not much to say with only one "character" moving.

selvaraj:

good...

Victor Wong:

Movement timing is OK, but there are still some instances of twinning happening. I also get the impression that you ran out of time before animating the other character.

Jacob Patrick:

watch silloutte especially with these characters....

like on "todd" kind of hard to read what he's doing

hands up in the air poses, a little un natrual...

indeed pose

legs felt locked until walking...

Gregory Marlow:

not bad motion, hand breaks at the end.

Marcelle Marais:

needs lots of work

Steve Sloan:

I like it, its really simple, but it gets the job done