Carlos Fins:

My suggestion would be to keep the "foamy latte" pose longer.. right now he goes into and out of it right away. I would have kept him bearing down on the other guy for longer. Lip synch could be a bit stronger.

David Humphreys:

The pose around frame 110 is great but you could maybe hold it a little longer or even push it further.

Good timing and some nice clear poses.

Steve Sloan:

I liked the animation, i found that past frame 160 they looked like they were having a conversation though, it needed more emotion there.

Jacopo Armani:

Cool!
Animation fits well with the characters.
Not quite sure about the pose at 117. Probably the cup could have been more along his body.
Very good work!

Christiaan Moleman:

On 112 the way his arm moves up with him leaning over the other guy feels kinda stiff. Needs overlap and loosening up in general. bend the arm, gesture with the cup etc.

Jesse Baumgartner:

Some nice stuff. Jacobim's arm feels stiff on "foamy latte". Could break that elbow a bit to get some drag on that arm. Some nice stuff on Todd with the tie adjustment.

Ipseidio Glitterati:

Nice... like the acting with todd the best.
don't care for Jacobim's arm up in the air at 111.

Emmanuel:

Nice animation! One thing I'd probably like to critique on this is the way Jacobin talks. The side view doesn't seem too clear to me. Other than that good work!

Santiago Arellano:

Very good work on shifting the focus between two characters, still at the end, I was expeciting a bigger and more powerful reaction at the end when he throws the latte at him.

Erik Griott:

i suggest getting a book called "The Animators Survival Kit". it goes over all of the animation principles that you need to know.

Taber Dunipace:

I see some pretty good looking animation here and fair acting as well. I guess my problem with this animation is that this is just mediocre overall.

The mug stuff is the weakest of the actions. Needs more cowbell.

Robert Tighe:

Nice fixing the tie. The synch felt a bit off. Pretty good timing.

mark whitcombe:

nice, i like it

Noah Arntson:

I like how Jac gets in Todd's face. He could've carried this energy to the end.

Tom Cho:

Good posing and acting but it seems to need more facial work.

Aaron Clement:

This is mine... no comment.

jacko yeoh:

i wish the lipsync and facial expression were abit better cause the overall animation seem nice.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort man!

Damon Smith:

Todds first gasp isn't quite in synch (audio to action)

Irfan Ahmed:

nice work!

selvaraj:

great work...i like your animation..

Chris Bull:

like the tie pull but didn't have much.. pull to it before the guy was pulled along. Could've used more force behind shouting tom, tapping guy on the back or something else. Right arm up in air is a bit distracting and unnecessary I thought. Tie straightening was great!

Jacob Patrick:

not sure what your rig can do, but screen left feels emotionless

Andre de Villiers:

Very nice! I especially like what you did with the tie. The lipsync could be a bit more dramatic, but overall it works!

Jonathan Flanagan:

I really liked the scenario and animation! Maybe a tweak to the left character's facial emotion?

Bruce Del Porte:

Nice job! Maybe just a staging comment, if you had scaled Todd to a different size it would emphasize their stature difference.

Ron Price:

Good, nasty interaction between the characters. I assume the facial rig is limiting you here... I wish there were more facial expressions available...

Brad Regier:

Murdock vs. Murdock; i love it. Pretty good acting. "Latte" arm seriously needs some lead-and-follow & overlap.

Kevin Woods:

would like a little facial action

Dan Abbruzzesi:

Great idea with the tie tug

Victor Wong:

There's room for more facial expression and acting with this. think about more key posing.

Andrew Linke:

Like the grabbing of the tie

Nick:

it would be nice if the mouth would open up a little bit wider. I really enjoy the tie pull though!

Kyle Rockman:

Nice job over all. The push with the cup at the end feel unnessary, instead he should just turn away. Awesome job though. Keep up the good work.

Brendan Fagan:

I think you need to be less complicated. There was no need for the tie animation. Although it was probly the best piece there. But It was not needed and takes the focus of the point. Which is he don't like foomy latte