Mark Bogdanoff:

interesting concept, but needs some work

Steve Lo:

probably discard the background flames. It distracts from the animation. Overall your animation seems very mechanical. The coffee/water spill does not have the right physics which makes it hurt the animation a bit.

Bob Dole:

That's quite a shiny character you've got there.

the movement feels a bit robotic, though, like the magic of disney anamatronics.

Ezra Allen:

very stiff you need to work on your overlapping motion. Nice flaming fart effect I couldnt get my particles working in time:(

Tony Rivera:

funny but need smoother inbetweens and stronger poses

Taber Dunipace:

Funny concept. The animation needs a lot of work here, from the floating moves to the linear arcs. Study body mechanics and review the principals.

mark whitcombe:

wild.
first camera zoom out happens too quick.

Jorge Zagatto:

funny idea, needs a lot of improvement

Erik Griott:

there isnt much here at all. youve got some nice effects and some interesting lighting, but this site is for animation, so that other stuff doesnt matter. i can see the direction you were going for when you made this, but you really need to work on acting. if you didnt act this scene out yourself you really should do that next time. 90% of animation is planning.

Robert Tighe:

uh. yea

Tyler Phillips:

That was totally gross.

Carlos Fins:

ummm..yeah.

Dhar:

Woah, great special effects. Original concept. I felt that their acting could've been pushed a lot more.

V_I_C_K_Y:

Nice Deadly Thing.. Hehe

Aaron Clement:

The beginning was good. Felt a bit robotic throughout. The ending was a little tasteless.

Noah Arntson:

Seems like the tangents need smoothing and cleaning. Hilarious frame 306!

Tom Cho:

LOL. Good one. I think the fast pull should have been a simple cut.

jacko yeoh:

woah!! the farty part blew me off. haha cool ending. but animation needs work.

Geordie Martinez:

I'm a sucker for fart jokes. your set up is good with the demon, but the facial expressions need to be pushed more. Try and break the rig.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort man!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Gross! The effects are nice but we rate animation, and it needs work. There's not much acting, the barely change pose or expressions.

selvaraj:

good work...

chrisbyk:

original idea

Chris Dardis:

not great man, I would suggest spending all you time on the animation (ie no particles, shiny rendering). flaming fart doesn't fit.

Jacob Patrick:

horrible, jarring camera move

can his spine rotate???

keep legs under him more balanced

can tell this is an early animation in your career, you have some good elements that show potential - keep animating

Bruce Del Porte:

I had a lot of fun doing this piece. Thanks for looking.

The models were by Andy Gibbons and Mark Skodacek.

Bruce

Victor Wong:

Tweens seems to be a bit stiff; this could be because this is a very complex character to move. Facial expressions could use some more variety.

Josh Doohen:

wow!

Dan Dulberger:

Best end yet!