Ogre Oh Ogre
September Competition Winner
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Mark Bogdanoff:
Neat idea!
Justin Weg:
Nice 2d and cute idea
Christiaan Moleman:
Really nice. Love the style and the acting choices. Great expressions. Only crit is maybe the timing is a bit even, mostly towards the end.
David Andrade:
Haha this is great. What wonderful animation.. Very well controlled and lovely acting/principles.
Farty and bloated has the same weight as foamy latte. I mean the actions are different enough but still I think you could have found a better choice there, it works, yes, but it just feels repititve to me.
I just love how you transistion man. Such clean poses and beautiful work. ;)
Aaron Clement:
Hehe... nice job... I've never seen two heads like that before... not in the club at least... good work!
Jeranimo:
Cool! I love it! I really do! Keep up the great work.
Cheers! ;)
Brad Bradbury:
impressive volume control. The posing of "your" is odd with his hand right in front of the others face.
Traci Plagmann:
Cute idea!
Taber Dunipace:
Yes! Great acting moments, a clever premise, good acting quality, and to top it all off, YOU CAN DRAW!
I guess I have to find something to criticize so I'll pick timing. The timing in this piece is completely determined by the audio performance. I can see you're no amateur so I'd encourage you to build different timing into the body gestures than in the cadence of the head movements and lip sync.
Once again, great job!
Erik Griott:
kewl! great character, great acting, funny story, you've applied core fundamentals! i love it, great job!
Robert Tighe:
Very funny. The mechanics are very nice. You're always on model. Nice stretch in the upper body in the turns.
The lip synch feels a bit off.
I wish there were more emphasis on INDEED.
Nice poses overall.
Ron Price:
Original idea, nicely done. Nice solid drawing!
Carlos Fins:
Nice!
Anthony Travieso:
I really like this. Great work
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Wohohooo! Really nice! Love the character, love the acting, love the animation. Congratulations on a great job!
David Humphreys:
WOW!
really good, all hail the power of the pencil.
Dan Abbruzzesi:
I love traditional animation and you facial expressions are phenomenal. Great job!
Dhar:
Loved your pencil animation. I thought this was great. It had all the traditional animation elements in it. Excellent.
Leon Gittens:
really good idea, nice acting
Sara Wade:
This is gorgeous! A really clever idea too!
Martin Mangiafave:
REALLY GOOD IDEA !!! NICE ANIMATION
P Walters:
Nice!
Jessa Sininger:
Absolutely Great. You have a very good grasp on the 2D Principles. It's inspiring.
Bilal Ahmad:
nice effort man! very nice concept!
Marcos Borba Moreira:
love it! :)
Victor Wong:
Excellent timing all around.
mark whitcombe:
cool, i like this.
2 headed characters have so much potential
Erik Eidukas:
Very nice
Ezra Allen:
best bit of 2d animation ive seen here. The characters right arm moves a bit too fast when he says sharklvere it needs to bounce more
Tom Cho:
Very consistent volumes and stays on model. Good job!
James Direen:
I would describe this animation as flippin wicked neato! I love the way you switch control of the arms from one character to the other. and the use of head angle and posture is brilliant, one jocko looks like he is standing over and confronting, while tod is cowering away - all with one spine! the only thing that held me back from giving it 11 starts was that the lipsync seems slightly late. Which I understand is freaking hard to get right in 2D. I'm betting if you shuttle the audio up 2 - 4 frames, you'll be right on. This will definitly end up in my inspiring animation folder :)
Tom Law:
... All I can say is wow
Roger Feron:
Nice concept and very nice animation.
V_I_C_K_Y:
Hats Off Sir..!
Gill Frank:
Aaaa good old 2d animation. Love it. :)
Tyler Phillips:
Wow, this awesome!!! Amazing!!!
Andrew Stovesand:
Ha!
Chris Boyoko:
Really great work.
Damon Smith:
Cool....
Noah Arntson:
Awesome how you made them each the master of their domain. Would've loved to see this pushed more, like they have both independent personalities, so they're leaning way in, head butting, pulling apart from the other one.
doc:
two head fighting is a nice touch.
Kristoffer Clark:
that was great!
Roman Stalder:
i love the good old handdrawing animations...
Kleber Macedo:
Ok! We hava a winner. Fantastic job.
Ali Tezel:
Excellent idea and execution. Congrats man!
Edward Hull:
Awesome 2D work! I especially like how you set it up with only one head and then unexpectedly reveal the other. Very nice.
Paulo Clayton:
Nicely done hand-drawn! I like the two-heads concept; physical acting with only one body was very well done.
Tony Rivera:
awsome character good expressions but characters need more pesonality conflict
Jacob Patrick:
good - feels a little slow and even
'aware' - should have kept left hand pose, moves too much right there
Ipseidio Glitterati:
interesting idea to put them both together like that. Really nice drawing... good squash and stretch in the faces. when the guy on the right says Jacobin the hand of the guy on the left moves, maybe just a moving hold would be better.
PARK DAE EOK:
wow ~ great idea ! two head
Nanda van Dijk:
love the two head thing. lovely animated! realy nice
selvaraj:
very good animation.
Emmanuel:
Very different from the others. Really good animation and expression!
Don Dixon:
Its really nice to see some well done traditional animation here. Timing is dead on great ease in and ease outs. And the Concept is just great.
Jorge Zagatto:
Great idea, great animation, very very good. I really would rather more classical 2D animation here. The strength of action lines fells much more the life...
Dan Neuffer:
Awesome concept and amazing drawing/animation. Excellent!
wingscg@gmail.com:
good idea!
Steve Lo:
great concept with the two headed ogre. @frame 165 both arms spread out but i'd like to see just the arm of the speaker being extended to make it super clear which arm belongs to which head.
Jesse Baumgartner:
Really nice! Cool concept. Didn't see that second head coming.
Thomas Tadeusz Ciborowski:
maybe there is alittle to much movment ...
Andrew Linke:
Great traditional animation, very fluid fun characters
Andre de Villiers:
I like where this is going!
The lipsync can be pushed harder at "...indeed!".
jacko yeoh:
woah awesome. good to see some good ol' 2d, and what a nice fluid animation, and good idea too!
Kyle Rockman:
Awesome job!!!!!
Keep up the execellent work!
Renato S. Sena:
oh my god!!!! I don't belive, if i could put 1000 stars I was put! congratulations for your wonderful work on the classic animation, I almost cry when i saw the pegs rsss
Cat Hicks:
Very nice all around! The second head drinking is confusing. It almost spoils the reveal of a second head. You need to hide the cup or figure out something different to do there.
Andrew:
Awesome animation. Awesome Concept.
Chris Woods:
Awesome concept. The reveal of the second head is really nice and the back and forth energy as the two of them negotiate with one another is awesome. The gesture on "Your mistake indeed" is my favourite part! Nice work.
Amy:
excellent idea. I want to see more animation like this. I love your creatures. Careful with with the lip-movement. A little sloppy. Great facial expressions.
vanigoel:
nice idea. Nice traditional animation effort. It could bee a little more clearer and exaggerated.
emerson:
11
Rowan Simpson:
ahha, I find this to be one of the more entertaining ones that i've seen. I love the fact you did it in 2D. Keep it coming I loved it!
Korvar The Fox:
Funny idea, and well-executed.
Calvin Culy:
Nice idea and very well done
Marcellis:
Could use some snappier timing/action on the dropping of the cup, and the action at the end. It seems a bit mushy; a little too much action is happening at once over too little time. Other than that, this is pretty sweet. Cool idea, with the two-headed guy.
Mads Johansen:
Cool! It's very nice to see 2d animation in here. And the quality is very nice.









Animator: Bruno Celegão Monteiro
Description: His mommy gave him a lot of Foammy latte when he was just a young ogre in the forest. But you know ogres, they have many personalities within!!!
Experience: 2 years as professional
Time taken: 00:00 to 4 AM during a week.