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Both got it wrong?

by Jovan

Final Rating: 3.27. Finished 144 out of 183 entries.

283 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Jovan

Description: cc-by-sa (CC) Blender Institute, based on original characters (C) by Martin Lodewijk

Agent 327: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab79ebb3ea141675bbad5

Victim: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab97abb3ea1415d1e2648

Experience: i'm a student, half a year.

Time taken: 5+ hours

Comments:

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Reece Morgado:

The basic gestures are nice, but the lips and faces are very hard to see and movements don't have much weight behind them. Work on your easing and motion-graphing and you could very easily have something very nice here!

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice setup, but a shame that they are so far from camera and turned to profile like that because it's pretty impossible to see their facial expressions

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The idea seems solid, but it needs a few more inbetweens to adjust their speed, and a bit more dynamic poses between the characters, otherwise their performances come off as flat.