Final Rating: 3.28. Finished 143 out of 183 entries.

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Animator: Vitor kuhlmann santos

Description: A detent having a conversation to a visitor, and start a subject that is not fun.

Experience: I am a studant and I started to pratice 3d animation about 6 months ago

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Adam Watkins:

The lip sync was great up until the cut to the second character. I think you began the "w" lip movement a bit to early when saying "wouldn't be funny at all". I liked the facial expressions for both characters but I felt like the second one was a bit too still in their body movement.
Pretty good but could use some improvement.

Eilin Berrio:

I think you need more interesting poses, maybe have a live action reference and make sure you don't only animate individual parts of the character as all movements (even the slight ones) come from the core.

Edoardo Sartori:

Can't see anything.

Robert Cartwright:

Great job with the facial expressions on this scene! You can really tell the hopelessness of the man behind bars. The one thing I think you should tweak is the very beginning of the second man's lip sync. He randomly begins to say O with no voice over and then it fixes itself after about half a second. He should probably just keep his mouth shut until he begins to speak again. Great work!

Catherine Lachepelle:

Character B never moves his body or hands - that could help the shot a lot!

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The second character needs the most improvement, both in animation and lipsync. The second is passable, but could use some refinement.