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Reflecting on the Past

by Warrick Chung

Final Rating: 4.19. Finished 96 out of 183 entries.

262 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Warrick Chung

Description: 2 people talk reflect on their pasts

Experience: Beginner

Time taken: 3-4 days

Comments:

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Elisabeth Janerka:

Two things
1. Why doesn't the guy in the chair have eyes??
2. The composition could be improved a lot. I didn't even notice the character on the right at first, because he is so far out to the side. I would lower the camera (it is a bit weird that we are looking down on them like this), and then rotate is so we get both characters more centered in frame. Finally I would move the character (to the right) closer to the character sitting in the chair

Joshua Kaberline:

Nice job!

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Good animation, could use some more energy and personality to the characters.