Final Rating: 2.79. Finished 176 out of 183 entries.

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Animator: shannon bailey

Description: The two main characters are a scientist and a chef
The chef is carrying a secret recipe and the scientist is carrying poison. The two men walk into one another and mix the viles up.

Experience: 10 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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John M:

Extra points for the storyline, but animation lacking and too many camera movements. Needs to be a lot crisper. Nice try.

Daniel Miller:

it'd be funny if the baker switched the vials with the other guy at "...it wouldn't be funny at all"

Eilin Berrio:

I like your story but I believe animation could be much better, more interesting poses (line of actions), composition (rule of thirds)...

Catherine Lachepelle:

The characters are too static : add body and hand movement during the dialogue to give them more life

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The character animation is clearly still in keyposes, and the camera cuts are very confusing.