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The Greatest Magician

by altaf

Final Rating: 5.78. Finished 31 out of 183 entries.

331 views including the voting period.

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Animator: altaf

Description: claiming to be best ! an older brother is going to any limits to preserve their Traditional Occupation.

Experience: 5 plus years

Time taken: last 20 days on and of

Comments:

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Edoardo Sartori:

What is the story ?

Jamie F:

Some nice stuff here. But the camera move at the beginning doesn't work for me. And the breakdown at about frame 250 - 260 makes no sense to me - I think to fit the move and mood it needs to be more functional and less "wavey"

Robert Cartwright:

Love the extra effort you put into this! Very fluid! Great work!

Harry:

I really like how you made audio into a story. I feel like the second characters faint doesn't quite read as well as some of the other actions but I love his little shake in the end. Great work!

Elisabeth Janerka:

Good potential in animation, but the setup is very unclear

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Some of the choices for the second character are a bit strange (why does he fall down and get up all of a sudden?) but otherwise the animation is great.