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Fun Talk on a Park Bench

by Jamie Kalen

Final Rating: 3.48. Finished 130 out of 183 entries.

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Animator: Jamie Kalen

Description: im in high school okay

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 hours

Comments:

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Adam Watkins:

A really promising animatic with good posing and composition but needs that animation. Great start though!

Reece Morgado:

There's a lot of character and personality behind each scene here, it's just a shame you didn't manage to get past the storyboard/animatic phase

Elisabeth Janerka:

Had to watch it twice to understand who was talking.

Robert Cartwright:

what a heartbreaking animatic. Lovely style you have there, and man what a strong message you put forward, even with so few frames I feel for the character with the horns. Great work!

Jamie F:

Lovely drawings. Would have loved to have seen this finished.

Richard Adams:

Beautifully drawn, appealing character design, idea and staging works really well. Wish there were a lot more in-between drawings to smooth out the stuttery animation.

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Nice animatic. Interesting fresh twist on the lines.