Danielle Hope Abrom:

Try and adjust the facings of the polygons in the right side of the character's bodies so it is the same color!

Conway Dobbs:

movement is odd in parts

Lucy Harris:

I really like the poses and the expressions for the characters in this, really clean animation too!

Donald Brooks:

I think the character on the right looking back and forth is too repetitive. Also it seems as things move at the same time a lot and adding some element of keep alive will make the scene even better!