karan moshary:

good job,, but there's less animation in it

loris:

layout note: in the first shot the character goes right to left, in the second one he goes left to right...that's an error

Stéphane Sartori:

Nice poses, However you should work more on the timing. Everything is very floaty.

Ben Hall:

The problem is the movements are too slow sure he's sneaking around but even then the motions wouldn't look this floaty but keep at it